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Looks like Coco was just trying to add some excitement to their owner's life, first by going on a solo adventure and then by bringing in a dead crow as a gift :))

The doll part gave the story quite a turn. I managed to get the death ending and living happily with part. The story is pretty well-structured.

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Very captivating horror story! I was able to somewhat develop an emotional connection to my extraordinary dog Coco, despite the fact that by the end he mercilessly devoured my neck.

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Chills ran down my spine as I read this story. It's as if the author has unlocked a door to a terrifying world that I never want to enter. The way they captured the eerie atmosphere and the sense of dread is simply bone-chilling. I couldn't shake off the feeling of being watched long after I finished reading. This is a truly creepy tale that will haunt me for a long time.

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The scene with the white figure emerges from the closet was quite creepy. The author did an excellent job of building tension and creating an eerie atmosphere leading up to this point. 

Overall, I really enjoyed this short scary story :) hope the author will continue polishing their writing skills and creating such engaging stories

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Interesting story, exciting adventure , I died in the game but with the hope that Coco is okay.